Thursday, October 16, 2014

Essay - Bedroom by Aaron

Bedroom

-- Aaron
  My bedroom has a lot of noises. Creeeeaaaakk. The creaking bunk bed makes a scary noise. Awoooo. The howling wind sounds more like wolves than wind. Shake, shake, shake. Swishing leaves sound like maracas in our bedroom. Snorrrrrre. My brother's, Gordon, snoring is so loud, it seems like a person is snoring in a microphone! Those are the noises you hear in our bedroom.

  Our bedroom is home to many awesome sights. The LED light gives strong light for us to see in the dark. Ziippp. The Hotwheel Wall Track serves as a good test for new Hotwheels. Flip, flip, flip. The bookshelf holds many interesting books to read. The 2 posters on our wall are very advertising and realistic. Our closet has full of our clothes. These are some of the coolest things I've ever seen.

  My bedroom is my most favorite place ever! The huge variety of toys in our bedroom makes me happy. My trophies on the window makes me proud. Aaaahhhhhh. The pillow is a comfy place for my head to rest on. My loneliness was cured when Gordon started sleeping with me. My sleepiness depends on how late I sleep, but I am always a bit sleepy when I go to bed. Do you feel the same when you go to bed?
 
  Excellent smells can be smelled in our bedroom. Fresh air is always as sweet as spring in our bedroom. The maple tree fragrance is just overwhelming. The breakfast smell makes me run down the stairs to see what's being cooked. The old books give an odor that stinks. Eeewwwwww. You won't like the dirty clothes the most. Can you find all the smells in the bedroom?